So many excellent entries this
week that once again I tried an arbitrary rule to rate them. Final lines:, I
thought, but how to choose between Antonia’s
‘long pig’, Patricia’s ‘cylindrical
drum’, John’s ‘I wish he hadn’t said
my name’ and David’s ‘Hell would be
unleashed…’?
I couldn’t, so broke another,
lightly-applied, rule and chose David for
a second consecutive week, on the
strength of his opening sentence, broken-winged gargoyle and the
so-very-effective “eyes above the waterline”.
Next week's decision will be simpler for me: Thursday I shall be in
Stirling, attending the Bloody
Scotland Crime Writing Festival and on Friday at a workshop, one of who’s tutors
is Sophie Hannah.
Therefore I am asking each
of you to nominate, on Friday 8th September, your personal winner.
Thereafter, for a couple of weeks, my presence is likely to be a bit erratic, but rest assured, prompt words are already scheduled.
Words
for next week: entrails kiss perfect
Entries
by midnight Thursday 7th September, words
posted Friday 8th September*
Usual rules: 100 words maximum (excluding title) of
flash fiction or poetry using all of the three words above in the genres of
horror, fantasy, science fiction or noir. Serialised fiction is, as always,
welcome. All variants and use of the words and stems are fine. Feel free to
post links to your stories on Twitter or Facebook or whichever social media you
prefer.