tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post3823923928653801001..comments2024-03-28T07:30:54.930+00:00Comments on The Prediction: 13th celebrates the sinister ...Sandra Davieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comBlogger71125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-73728618477489601112015-08-21T14:33:45.926+01:002015-08-21T14:33:45.926+01:00Congratulations "and don't make me say it...Congratulations "and don't make me say it again." This felt so polished.<br />On second thought, I'm guessing I will be saying it again.Michael D. Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07849385440410681809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-72449530624882532522015-08-20T21:03:02.003+01:002015-08-20T21:03:02.003+01:00What a consistent voice. What happens next???What a consistent voice. What happens next???Mashiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13586160026765377447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-37254859781004032842015-08-20T21:01:16.237+01:002015-08-20T21:01:16.237+01:00100 words is too many, huh? I really like this.100 words is too many, huh? I really like this.Mashiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13586160026765377447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-59248692134591957852015-08-20T20:58:32.640+01:002015-08-20T20:58:32.640+01:00Soft as a downy quilt yet about a hard nut. Origin...Soft as a downy quilt yet about a hard nut. Original.Mashiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13586160026765377447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-60591547668289558312015-08-20T20:57:07.075+01:002015-08-20T20:57:07.075+01:00Excellent ending to a well told action piece.Excellent ending to a well told action piece.Mashiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13586160026765377447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-70979967351317973392015-08-20T20:55:26.626+01:002015-08-20T20:55:26.626+01:00Neat well packaged tale tied off smoothly at the e...Neat well packaged tale tied off smoothly at the end.Mashiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13586160026765377447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-61650885667588155482015-08-20T20:52:33.354+01:002015-08-20T20:52:33.354+01:00Wonderful interplay of characters, writing smooth ...Wonderful interplay of characters, writing smooth as you like.Mashiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13586160026765377447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-3741671842067998932015-08-20T20:50:37.353+01:002015-08-20T20:50:37.353+01:00A rich soup of words as ever, mesmerising in such ...A rich soup of words as ever, mesmerising in such a short word- count .Mashiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13586160026765377447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-74930584247032229022015-08-20T20:23:02.807+01:002015-08-20T20:23:02.807+01:00Now that's a first, isn't it? The Captain ...Now that's a first, isn't it? The Captain seeking help elsewhere. I hope he finds it before he has to sacrifice all his crew.<br />As ever, I'm grateful for your unfailing participatio,here.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-91607806990945878032015-08-20T20:15:23.818+01:002015-08-20T20:15:23.818+01:00PS; so busy with commenting, I overlooked congratu...PS; so busy with commenting, I overlooked congratulations to last week's excellent winners!Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-40856722168780369592015-08-20T20:14:50.129+01:002015-08-20T20:14:50.129+01:00one day I will get the Captain to come earlier and...one day I will get the Captain to come earlier and give me his instalment, but it's been a tardy week generally. I have been waiting four days now for Anne Boleyn to give me the next instalment of her section on our liege lord. She's here tonight but had to wait for the Captain to dictate his instalment first... it gets stupid around here. Spirit have just given me yet another book to Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-40241381198609747932015-08-20T20:12:53.817+01:002015-08-20T20:12:53.817+01:00oh yes, good one, so much anticipation and then - ...oh yes, good one, so much anticipation and then - bam, the old hag, curse of many a 'love' story, ends it...Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-15292374538931758712015-08-20T20:12:01.044+01:002015-08-20T20:12:01.044+01:00this is clever and emotional at the same time. Nic...this is clever and emotional at the same time. Nice one.Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-7054763488997395772015-08-20T20:11:25.695+01:002015-08-20T20:11:25.695+01:00like the thoughts and images conjured by this.like the thoughts and images conjured by this.Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-54101752757136042882015-08-20T20:10:41.546+01:002015-08-20T20:10:41.546+01:00one way of ending something... a lot going on - ac...one way of ending something... a lot going on - action, that is - in so few words.Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-41053298094755887022015-08-20T20:09:17.181+01:002015-08-20T20:09:17.181+01:00good little piece this, imagery abounds and intrig...good little piece this, imagery abounds and intrigue, too.Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-2975161590065521952015-08-20T20:08:30.682+01:002015-08-20T20:08:30.682+01:00a major turning point, methinks, summoned to the p...a major turning point, methinks, summoned to the palace, oh my.Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-67504677821970153592015-08-20T20:07:49.592+01:002015-08-20T20:07:49.592+01:00I do love horror and this is exceptional. Thanks f...I do love horror and this is exceptional. Thanks for that!Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-1714423893692845842015-08-20T20:07:02.682+01:002015-08-20T20:07:02.682+01:00yes, wonderful imagery and good use of the prompts...yes, wonderful imagery and good use of the prompts, hardly noticed them!Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-66491362655126865002015-08-20T20:06:13.721+01:002015-08-20T20:06:13.721+01:00good one, as Michael says, clever use of the promp...good one, as Michael says, clever use of the prompts.Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-23198768118595869752015-08-20T16:15:16.153+01:002015-08-20T16:15:16.153+01:00Straightforward, lulls into sense of security and ...Straightforward, lulls into sense of security and then - <i>wham!</i> - nice one KaiSandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-19337475218518150992015-08-20T16:05:05.302+01:002015-08-20T16:05:05.302+01:00The Immortal 4
I left the club, one blonde in eac...<b>The Immortal 4</b><br /><br />I left the club, one blonde in each arm. This was going to be a good night. They giggled and tugged at my shirt with vigor.<br />“Ladies, calm down. There’s plenty of time for this when we get to my place.”<br />“Sam, we just want to have some fun.” The girl with the pearl earring squeezed my ass and struggled to control her laughter.<br />An old lady, head Kai Delmashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14913623803715499069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-92019100120337417332015-08-20T05:52:42.716+01:002015-08-20T05:52:42.716+01:00Once again, the breadth of your writing leaves me ...Once again, the breadth of your writing leaves me in awe, Mashie. Clever and intriguing, offering the reader so many interpretations.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-46473004328051879152015-08-20T05:49:59.385+01:002015-08-20T05:49:59.385+01:00"grumble of thunder" the loveliest use o..."grumble of thunder" the loveliest use of this prompt - and the easy, seamless sliding of all three prompts into the opening sentence is to be applauded. One of my favourites of your pieces, Michael.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-12487812536897233322015-08-20T04:48:38.977+01:002015-08-20T04:48:38.977+01:00I had to read this several times. A clever composi...I had to read this several times. A clever composition using the prompts. More poetry than prose. Well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15169638175376848621noreply@blogger.com