tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post3665995970700525029..comments2024-03-28T07:30:54.930+00:00Comments on The Prediction: Too spicy?Sandra Davieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comBlogger77125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-81801449242351498492015-07-11T16:35:47.163+01:002015-07-11T16:35:47.163+01:00Meant to say congratulations to you and Zaiure too...Meant to say congratulations to you and Zaiure too. Well done. x<br />NewbieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-66395838388242780172015-07-11T16:32:56.837+01:002015-07-11T16:32:56.837+01:00Thanks Ferg, I've only just logged onto this s...Thanks Ferg, I've only just logged onto this site again, so apologise for not acknowledging before now.<br /><br />NewbieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-39324530385005692952015-07-03T20:55:46.714+01:002015-07-03T20:55:46.714+01:00Thanks. I love this competition and seeing which d...Thanks. I love this competition and seeing which direction everyone takes with the three words.Timcorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08444672871784386227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-46921023731958417242015-07-03T04:49:15.672+01:002015-07-03T04:49:15.672+01:00Ooh - "hyaline" had me reaching for my d...Ooh - "hyaline" had me reaching for my dictionary: what a useful word! - and used in the creation of a scene with so very much behind it. Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-39260214777201034052015-07-03T04:45:14.965+01:002015-07-03T04:45:14.965+01:00A blessed pause in the Captain's frenetic dail...A blessed pause in the Captain's frenetic dailyness, Antonia, if not in yours - thank you for both contribution and comment.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-7305656927272442322015-07-03T04:02:16.485+01:002015-07-03T04:02:16.485+01:00Sad and beautiful. Loved your use of 'pianissi...Sad and beautiful. Loved your use of 'pianissimo'.Holly Karlssonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07070711432846821376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-84056573625926726142015-07-03T04:00:52.196+01:002015-07-03T04:00:52.196+01:00I agree with Rebecca about circular stories, love ...I agree with Rebecca about circular stories, love when they come back around.Holly Karlssonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07070711432846821376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-38905173897740791082015-07-03T03:59:22.190+01:002015-07-03T03:59:22.190+01:00Fun to see this continue. Loved the final line.Fun to see this continue. Loved the final line.Holly Karlssonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07070711432846821376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-58838461293461455152015-07-03T03:50:00.665+01:002015-07-03T03:50:00.665+01:00The Arch
The sun dripped, honey-gold, into the wa...<b>The Arch</b><br /><br />The sun dripped, honey-gold, into the waves, as Bess wrapped her arms around her knees, and turned her face away from the city's light.<br /><br />"You should use it," her boyfriend's ghost said. His hand passed ineffectually through the old, fish-shaped key in the sand.<br /><br />Bess ignored him, and the crumbling arch behind.<br /><br />"Aren&Holly Karlssonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07070711432846821376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-80340099097482600242015-07-02T21:20:41.406+01:002015-07-02T21:20:41.406+01:00There is heavyweight matter-of-factness in this wh...There is heavyweight matter-of-factness in this which emphasises the dreadful daily weight of the horror. <br />Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-6021929117209641992015-07-02T21:02:16.770+01:002015-07-02T21:02:16.770+01:00Thanks. I love this competition and seeing which d...Thanks. I love this competition and seeing which direction everyone takes with the three words.Timcorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08444672871784386227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-41862162026273959142015-07-02T20:57:26.818+01:002015-07-02T20:57:26.818+01:00it's been a bad week. Just when I think I'...it's been a bad week. Just when I think I've conquered one load of work... I added in 3 major migraines too, that doesn't help. So here I am with way too brief comments, apologies, and a further episode from the Captain, then back to what I am doing, listing endless items on Islebuy in an effort to boost the trade. Been bad...<br /><br />Infinity 103.<br />We rested. Cabin boy called Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-2110124002736029472015-07-02T20:55:45.677+01:002015-07-02T20:55:45.677+01:00I've cut it fine too, but taken time out to re...I've cut it fine too, but taken time out to read the entries, ending with this one, which is so good.Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-52541092091011938382015-07-02T20:54:55.735+01:002015-07-02T20:54:55.735+01:00very dark indeed, with a killer last line.very dark indeed, with a killer last line.Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-74304267651872564622015-07-02T20:54:19.323+01:002015-07-02T20:54:19.323+01:00definitely the dark side.definitely the dark side.Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-61132219416714404842015-07-02T20:53:55.414+01:002015-07-02T20:53:55.414+01:00there's a lot here to think on, if you give yo...there's a lot here to think on, if you give yourself time.Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-19625057215957405262015-07-02T20:53:09.588+01:002015-07-02T20:53:09.588+01:00superb depictions heresuperb depictions hereAntonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-53285989368421671342015-07-02T20:52:03.244+01:002015-07-02T20:52:03.244+01:00vivid as always!vivid as always!Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-22467794511930488172015-07-02T20:51:36.946+01:002015-07-02T20:51:36.946+01:00another superb instalment. How do you do that?????...another superb instalment. How do you do that?????Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-87997995506495287712015-07-02T20:50:48.252+01:002015-07-02T20:50:48.252+01:00brilliant instalment.brilliant instalment.Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-85731093760257623802015-07-02T20:50:23.525+01:002015-07-02T20:50:23.525+01:00getting more intriguing as it goes.
Busy comparing...getting more intriguing as it goes.<br />Busy comparing it with the way I speak with the 'dead', not bad so far... (LOL)Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-48468965200695007632015-07-02T20:49:17.448+01:002015-07-02T20:49:17.448+01:00we are told show don't tell but this breaks th...we are told show don't tell but this breaks that rule - and it works.Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-29445779778452288722015-07-02T19:31:50.888+01:002015-07-02T19:31:50.888+01:00He sits in the chair by the window and looks at me...He sits in the chair by the window and looks at me, unaware that I am there.<br />I still hate him, even though he’s in a vegetative state now.<br />The accident didn’t change everything though. He still gets more attention than I do, so I suppose he wins again.<br />The nurse just wiped some drool from the corner of his mouth - his mouth, full of stupid teeth that look like piano keys.<br />I Timcorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08444672871784386227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-35116139675660069362015-07-02T19:31:23.103+01:002015-07-02T19:31:23.103+01:00I've left it until the eleventh hour this week...I've left it until the eleventh hour this week! Anyway, here's Brethren...Timcorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08444672871784386227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-13523611801030735602015-07-02T05:59:32.445+01:002015-07-02T05:59:32.445+01:00Seth strong and arrogantly effective as ever. Love...Seth strong and arrogantly effective as ever. Love the use of piano, and the final line.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.com