tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post2578283302000104929..comments2024-03-28T07:30:54.930+00:00Comments on The Prediction: Late year, long nights, big moonsSandra Davieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comBlogger56125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-54192593999543617302016-12-24T07:55:42.965+00:002016-12-24T07:55:42.965+00:00I love that title "A Taxi Yurt Picnic Lunch&q...I love that title "A Taxi Yurt Picnic Lunch" An Exceptionally fun piece.William Davollhttp://eleventhstream.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-69604673570914458022016-12-24T07:52:42.699+00:002016-12-24T07:52:42.699+00:00Excellent piece, and a valid reason why you should...Excellent piece, and a valid reason why you should always keep one in the chamber.William Davollhttp://eleventhstream.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-77601137941630820732016-12-23T05:03:40.345+00:002016-12-23T05:03:40.345+00:00Short and even sweeeter than Bill's - thank yo...Short and even sweeeter than Bill's - thank you Rosie,Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-53801880761834481612016-12-23T05:02:22.887+00:002016-12-23T05:02:22.887+00:00Glad you were prompted into writing this sweet pie...Glad you were prompted into writing this sweet piece Bill.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-78430290101499056022016-12-23T05:00:30.326+00:002016-12-23T05:00:30.326+00:00What a clever, perfect opening line, evoking (at l...What a clever, perfect opening line, evoking (at least for me) the innocence of childhood Christmas and the purity of carols sung in a winter's night.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-11413241087757023892016-12-23T01:06:24.421+00:002016-12-23T01:06:24.421+00:00I wasn't going to write this week, the prompts...I wasn't going to write this week, the prompts didn't do anything for me, and my other daughter said, "I've still got my miracle spoon!" How could I resist?Bill Owenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08049211051802893173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-66714166705101348312016-12-23T00:56:03.265+00:002016-12-23T00:56:03.265+00:00Jeffrey Yorio
Thanks all for your comments. Th...Jeffrey Yorio <br /><br /><br />Thanks all for your comments. Though very new to poetry, I had never seen poetic styles mixed.<br /> I remembered the point-counter point on 60 Minutes and wondered how it would work in a poem and came up with this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-35855365215726008272016-12-23T00:49:21.343+00:002016-12-23T00:49:21.343+00:00Jeffrey Yorio
An enjoyable short, what else would...Jeffrey Yorio<br /><br />An enjoyable short, what else would a pirate princess do with her silver spoons.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-64101637214340363242016-12-23T00:45:17.257+00:002016-12-23T00:45:17.257+00:00Jeffrey Yorio using his phone
This was a good lau...Jeffrey Yorio using his phone<br /><br />This was a good laugh and light hearted. Definitely in contrast to the other entries.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-48338584688338943582016-12-22T23:53:44.993+00:002016-12-22T23:53:44.993+00:00The Adventures of Rosebud, Pirate Princess #56
A T...<b>The Adventures of Rosebud, Pirate Princess #56<br />A Taxi-Yurt Picnic Lunch</b><br /><br />It’s a miracle! I’m finally home! I’ve been out all day ferrying people about. There are still five or six things left to do today. I don’t care, I’m going to sleep … right after I wash the lunch spoons.Rosie Owenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04081720470707818925noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-58693334069938955732016-12-22T23:50:00.754+00:002016-12-22T23:50:00.754+00:00Their Last Chance
"That's it, we are out...<b>Their Last Chance</b><br /><br />"That's it, we are out of ammunition."<br /><br />The ragtag group had been reduced to just the two of them; he never thought that he'd be facing his imminent demise like this. Not with... Larry.<br /><br />"I've still got my miracle spoon!"<br /><br />He closed his eyes, sighed, and waited for the end. It couldn't come too Bill Owenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08049211051802893173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-91951493342585425062016-12-22T23:36:54.827+00:002016-12-22T23:36:54.827+00:00Thank you Jeffrey for your kind words, not sure wh...Thank you Jeffrey for your kind words, not sure where my words came from, other than I have closed down my office for the year. Unless the Bat Symbol appears in the skies above my home town that is. ;)William Davollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09705387237656647744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-85233354970992768492016-12-22T23:33:13.911+00:002016-12-22T23:33:13.911+00:00Love the reference to the using a long spoon to ea...Love the reference to the using a long spoon to eat with the devil and the clever way you played upon this. Brava!William Davollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09705387237656647744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-50267014529435625092016-12-22T23:29:38.480+00:002016-12-22T23:29:38.480+00:00Oh Sh!t. not the eyes. I'll probably not sleep...Oh Sh!t. not the eyes. I'll probably not sleep tonight thanks to that last line. William Davollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09705387237656647744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-79594161377248554702016-12-22T23:27:44.867+00:002016-12-22T23:27:44.867+00:00Very much enjoyed this piece, great use of the pro...Very much enjoyed this piece, great use of the prompts to move the story along.William Davollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09705387237656647744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-24008656977536793452016-12-22T23:24:59.725+00:002016-12-22T23:24:59.725+00:00This week has been most spooky with the word spoon...This week has been most spooky with the word spoon turning up, I had a new kitchen installed last year by the chap that installed Uri Geller's kitchen. I jokingly said I bet he had a big cutlery draw. Not found a heavy spoon but I have lost one, A Serving spoon that had ESPN stamped on the back.William Davollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09705387237656647744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-63908715242958535312016-12-22T23:16:28.124+00:002016-12-22T23:16:28.124+00:00Good luck with the dog sitting. The stray I have m...Good luck with the dog sitting. The stray I have mentioned before has taken up residence under my computer desk which is most uncomfortable at present. :)William Davollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09705387237656647744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-31031568661676483242016-12-22T23:14:34.315+00:002016-12-22T23:14:34.315+00:00Interestingly I fell either Uxbex is a logical bei...Interestingly I fell either Uxbex is a logical being or computer? The form does unsettle and give the feeling of an outer world where these characters exist.William Davollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09705387237656647744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-61850733272786192042016-12-22T23:10:44.963+00:002016-12-22T23:10:44.963+00:00"Wisdoms Measuring Stick long of tooth" ..."Wisdoms Measuring Stick long of tooth" is such an interesting line. Intriguing form.William Davollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09705387237656647744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-58737449649360854992016-12-22T23:07:07.695+00:002016-12-22T23:07:07.695+00:00As always you deliver, with "Still spooned b...As always you deliver, with "Still spooned by Cathra" and "Her laughter silver gilt"William Davollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09705387237656647744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-77543782640645013632016-12-22T23:03:03.216+00:002016-12-22T23:03:03.216+00:00 Ouch! Such discomfort executed in so few words.
... Ouch! Such discomfort executed in so few words. <br />William Davollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09705387237656647744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-77462318248396883932016-12-22T23:02:45.582+00:002016-12-22T23:02:45.582+00:00Jeffrey Yorio using my phone.
William, this is on...Jeffrey Yorio using my phone.<br /><br />William, this is one damn beautiful poem about hope and faith in your fellow man. Thank you very much.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-27757188846291130492016-12-22T22:57:43.383+00:002016-12-22T22:57:43.383+00:00Jeffrey Yorio here with my phone.
Me thinks that ...Jeffrey Yorio here with my phone.<br /><br />Me thinks that desperation is an ingredient created by the devil. This is a marvelous story of which even Machiavelli would find humor in.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-20921526171579796752016-12-22T22:52:36.213+00:002016-12-22T22:52:36.213+00:00Finally work is done for the year and managed to g...Finally work is done for the year and managed to get to write my entry for this week<br /><br /><b>A Fresh Beginning</b><br /><br />No more still night<br />No more wonder left to shine<br />Concern has turned to fright<br />and all but the aggressive are left behind.<br /><br />Let’s hope for a miracle in the coming year,<br />to cure a world thats led by anger, as others quake in fear.<br />WhoWilliam Davollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09705387237656647744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-14356107764812334452016-12-22T22:51:07.312+00:002016-12-22T22:51:07.312+00:00Jeffrey Yorio here on my phone.
Antonia, a rather...Jeffrey Yorio here on my phone.<br /><br />Antonia, a rather curdling story and well familiar creepy with the spoon and eyeballs, yet very enjoyable.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com