tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post1248762428659538044..comments2024-03-28T07:30:54.930+00:00Comments on The Prediction: Always moving.Sandra Davieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comBlogger70125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-64402077475472719662015-04-20T10:48:36.967+01:002015-04-20T10:48:36.967+01:00Very interesting piece, a lot was said that crafte...Very interesting piece, a lot was said that crafted a great visual as well as making me intrigued to what else was going on we didn't get to see.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16435040785497216859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-55243696401149383232015-04-20T10:46:34.302+01:002015-04-20T10:46:34.302+01:00Always enjoy a great conversational piece, not onl...Always enjoy a great conversational piece, not only the prompts used well but great careful choice with the wording.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16435040785497216859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-4386245894962311442015-04-20T10:44:22.957+01:002015-04-20T10:44:22.957+01:00He does sound a bit stressed, definitely needs mor...He does sound a bit stressed, definitely needs more iron in his diet, although he does seem to get himself into predicaments worth stressing over lolAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16435040785497216859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-31738078699276286732015-04-19T11:50:55.246+01:002015-04-19T11:50:55.246+01:00Good morning, m'dears. The Gates are Closed. ...Good morning, m'dears. The Gates are Closed. Winners and words this evening! Thank you all so much for playing this week!Colleen Foleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07412149737386384036noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-59093031220184483662015-04-18T22:00:29.103+01:002015-04-18T22:00:29.103+01:00'perusal' and 'baleful' - highligh...'perusal' and 'baleful' - highlights of this wicked little snippet, as Patricia says.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-54313105126901555542015-04-18T20:33:47.645+01:002015-04-18T20:33:47.645+01:00I've bookmarked the link so I can return and p...I've bookmarked the link so I can return and peruse at my leisure. :)Patricia Purvishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09920488641153954463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-84690537602767211042015-04-18T20:19:15.910+01:002015-04-18T20:19:15.910+01:00What a wicked snippet this was. I must certainly c...What a wicked snippet this was. I must certainly check out the link your provided as I am anxious to see what other gems await me. From the first line to the last, this was intriguing.Patricia Purvishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09920488641153954463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-15516003287689467962015-04-18T20:17:12.879+01:002015-04-18T20:17:12.879+01:00Love the little touch of humour in this episode. A...Love the little touch of humour in this episode. As always, the dialogue is amazing and the scenario constantly leaves us wanting more.Patricia Purvishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09920488641153954463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-35202880508469172092015-04-18T05:58:41.525+01:002015-04-18T05:58:41.525+01:00Note: this is not a Nate and Seth story, but conne...Note: this is not a Nate and Seth story, but connected to a work in progress that wants to be a novel when it grows up. Other bits are here: http://pushcomestoshove.blogspot.com/p/revelations.html<br />__________________<br /><br /><b>Following Orders</b><br /><br />According to his lingering perusal, the politician liked my figure. I cast a baleful glare at the damned angel behind me. His masterRR Kovarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05165990070862127913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-29070260712326574252015-04-18T05:53:04.503+01:002015-04-18T05:53:04.503+01:00Such joy on their repartee, as ever, and superb ki...Such joy on their repartee, as ever, and superb kick of the final line.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-3754052184763874872015-04-18T05:50:52.553+01:002015-04-18T05:50:52.553+01:00Yes indeed - the Captain IS a worrier, and the ope...Yes indeed - the Captain IS a worrier, and the opening of this and its seamless use of prompts superb.<br />I'm now concerned about that rotting meat ... Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-80214660834269391202015-04-18T05:48:04.605+01:002015-04-18T05:48:04.605+01:00It's all been said above, but I did enjoy &quo...It's all been said above, but I did enjoy "A dizzy spell took hold" These serials are as addictive to read as write aren't they?Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-88486162248053807992015-04-18T05:41:48.367+01:002015-04-18T05:41:48.367+01:00Square One
Nate frowned. “Does the loom symbol me...<b>Square One</b><br /><br />Nate frowned. “Does the loom symbol mean anything to you?”<br /><br />I shook my head. “There’s a motel down the road. Let’s get you settled with drugs for your head. I’ll do research.”<br /><br />“So, you hunt me down like a beast with a scent, and figure everything’s back to normal?”<br /><br />“I thought you’d be done sulking. It’s not like I had it any easier thanRR Kovarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05165990070862127913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-75955690074308609782015-04-18T05:39:55.235+01:002015-04-18T05:39:55.235+01:00Such delightfully twisted ruminations. Worry *is* ...Such delightfully twisted ruminations. Worry *is* like a drug, further proof that the Captain is wiser than he'd readily let on. The spoiled meat bit was stomach-turning, yet true to both story and setting.RR Kovarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05165990070862127913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-63417446512914814202015-04-18T05:37:59.433+01:002015-04-18T05:37:59.433+01:00Great cliffhanger! You manage to paint such a gran...Great cliffhanger! You manage to paint such a grand picture in so few words. I am mesmerized.RR Kovarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05165990070862127913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-83797759019459711612015-04-18T05:36:30.677+01:002015-04-18T05:36:30.677+01:00Fantastic story with a delightful twist that reset...Fantastic story with a delightful twist that reset the whole tale in my head. I needed a good laugh, so thank you for that!RR Kovarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05165990070862127913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-34675458959174625922015-04-18T05:34:35.049+01:002015-04-18T05:34:35.049+01:00This is so heartbreaking, especially since she is ...This is so heartbreaking, especially since she is blunt in her honesty. It's raw, and I felt it all. RR Kovarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05165990070862127913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-43570197140486790292015-04-18T05:31:32.383+01:002015-04-18T05:31:32.383+01:00Their back and forth barbs are yet tinged with aff...Their back and forth barbs are yet tinged with affection, however strained and odd, which makes the tension palpable. I never tire of this story. You have such a gift for dialogue and characterization.RR Kovarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05165990070862127913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-1215871541871462962015-04-18T05:29:48.960+01:002015-04-18T05:29:48.960+01:00I am impressed at the way you capture his horror a...I am impressed at the way you capture his horror and eagerness at war in a single moment. This is just gorgeous.RR Kovarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05165990070862127913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-18179948973970496952015-04-18T05:28:17.011+01:002015-04-18T05:28:17.011+01:00This has such an amazing tone and voice for so few...This has such an amazing tone and voice for so few words. There's something humorous yet awful about the drunk remembrance. RR Kovarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05165990070862127913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-18075677201411349792015-04-18T05:26:42.518+01:002015-04-18T05:26:42.518+01:00The language sets as much of the scene as the desc...The language sets as much of the scene as the descriptions. That's a deft touch. I find this equally charming and chilling.RR Kovarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05165990070862127913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-21750924248584488262015-04-18T05:25:20.611+01:002015-04-18T05:25:20.611+01:00This is a mobius strip of intricate horror and sad...This is a mobius strip of intricate horror and sadness. I keep reading it, as if I, too, am stuck in the loop.RR Kovarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05165990070862127913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-14591861865481594062015-04-18T02:18:38.611+01:002015-04-18T02:18:38.611+01:00I can really add little to what has gone before wh...I can really add little to what has gone before when commenting on this episode of the tale. I think perhaps "well-loved, black-hewn figure" was my favourite part. You have an instinctive talent for ferreting out just the right combination.Patricia Purvishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09920488641153954463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-54557445771226401612015-04-18T02:16:29.644+01:002015-04-18T02:16:29.644+01:00Our Captain's voice is always so true to his c...Our Captain's voice is always so true to his character and I love the back references to words that were commissioned some episodes ago. Why do I feel we have not seen the last of this creature that the Captain finds so haunting? Those last two questions are perfection.Patricia Purvishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09920488641153954463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-187530862792892291.post-6364013541673902612015-04-18T02:14:09.578+01:002015-04-18T02:14:09.578+01:00Oh my....what a place to stop. Did you really have...Oh my....what a place to stop. Did you really have to run out of the word limit at that point? This serialization is delicious.Patricia Purvishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09920488641153954463noreply@blogger.com